Developmental Edits

Refining your story, thread by thread.

The edit letter you'll receive will summarize your book's strengths, opportunities for improvement, and recommended revisions. I will include first reactions via inline comments so you can view your work from an outside reader's perspective.

I will focus on:

  • Story Opening & Closing

  • Pacing

  • Character Motivation & Arcs

  • Relationships

  • Dialogue

  • Writer Voice/Narration

  • Continuity Issues

  • World Building/Setting

  • Inconsistences

$12 per 1,000 words